Story of a broken heart.....
I miss u...
I miss u its true...
bt i cant tell it 2 anybdy nt evn u
i dun even let myself realise the same..
coz it gives me nvr endng pain..
I knw u r gone..
N hav left me alone...
Frnds say u need 2 move on..
Bt me still dere waitng 4 u...2 cum n hold me on..
I knw i hv been proved as an emotional fool..
Bt, i still dun believe it was u who used me as a dumb doll...
I was so proud of our relation..
Bt 4 u it was just a sensation!!
So many questions r left unanswered..
Which will always b a mystery n remain puzzled
u will still remain the best 4 me..
The one who understud all the thicks n thins in me...
Though, I will always remember u.,,
n u hv already erased me from u...
Bt, how should i remembr u as the one who made me smyl..
Or the one whu ..Held my hand, walkd 4 a myl n said gud bye...
the myl which we covered in years...
Has so many memories like a sweet bear
still i m here standng all alone ..
Waitng 4 the day..
to hear my name in ur voice..
ur eyes in which i want to see my smyl..
N ur hands, to hold me n say ..sry i 4gt the way 4 sumtym…..lets move on!!
By Gurleen Kaur
Hi soni dis one is so beautiful n nice dat I don't have words to praise it.....seriosuly damm guddd,,,gud luck ....dis one is very nice I must say....tk cr
ReplyDeleteits gud....movin on life is d way 2 real happiness....nd i personally feel dat if sumone has ditched u so dere is no need 2 wait 4 dat person...gv a damm to dese kind of people...n thnk dat dere mst b sumone who ll truely nd selfishlessly luv u....
ReplyDeletehi soni very nice....god bles u
ReplyDeletehi soni....very nice blog....god bles u
ReplyDeleteSoni, you are not alone...God is with you and He will guide you according to His plan...very nicely you have expressed, I like it. God Bless you! Ross uncle
ReplyDeletehmmm nice one...
ReplyDeletegurleen, awesome work done...
ReplyDeletei feel ur work is totally commendable and keep writing stuff like dis which can take you to places...
and do make sure u dnt lose this talent of ur's in ur busy lyf...
just hope for the best for u...
all d best
cheers
thank u all ..so so much !!
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem, trully heart felt,
ReplyDeletei would like to share something i got as a msg once.
Life only comes around once make sure u spend it with the right person ...
Find a guy .. who calls you beautiful instead of hot.
who calls you back when you hang up on him.
who will stay awake just to watch you sleep. Wait for the guy who ... kisses
your forehead.
Who wants to show you off to the world when you are in your sweats.
Who holds your hand in front of his friends.
Who is constantly reminding you of how much he cares about you and how lucky he
is to have you.
Who turns to his friends and says, ' That's her!!
n the truth is that all women actually keep on waiting for their mr.perfect
@ kanika ...bt sweeety such guys dun exist ny more ..so we should better stop dreaming abt such extincted characters!!
ReplyDeletesometimes its really hard to believe or accept dat d person whom v loved so much has left us.... movin on in life is not practical coz its not easy to forget those who became significant part of our life.....
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ReplyDeletethat was very very good
ReplyDeleteAnd love is like a burning sun it never's goes out, and sometime love is dark and you never find it
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ReplyDelete@ amit thnx...true luv nvr goes away ..it always remain with us forever ...in the form of memories ...but yeh darkness wala concept nahi samajh aya!!
ReplyDeleteNice !
ReplyDeleteTune apni poem padhwani thi mujhse...LOL...ne ways gud one.....but read dis one it goes like dis..............
ReplyDeleteOut of the night that covers me,
Black as the Pit from pole to pole,
I thank whatever gods may be
For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance
I have not winced nor cried aloud.
Under the bludgeonings of chance
My head is bloody, but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds, and shall find, me unafraid.
It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll.
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
@ khurafati nitin ..thnx a ton ..!!!
ReplyDelete@faisal ...thnx ..n is it written by u ??
ReplyDeletehi...this is a gud one but i bet that if u write a chirpy happy poem direct from ur heart then it will definitely cheer u up as well as ur frens.... i knw this means a lot to u but life becomes happy if u see it with a smile...
ReplyDeletethis is the truth of life................n i really dont want to discuss abt only one side,,,,,,,think once abt another side,,,,,,,,,also...there must be something,,,,things changes by time,,,,n it hurts a lot,,,each side,,,
ReplyDelete@ nishi ...ya sure i willl do tht too ..bt this is the truth ...n one cannot always hide such feelings behind smiles!!
ReplyDeletehey, that's a nice poem ...
ReplyDeleteone can quite relate to most of it ... at some point of life or the other everyone feels what you have written here. good job :)
an emotional n senti poem...gud job
ReplyDeleteI can only say i can understand your pain.Try to find out the solution if you cant follow the word..lets move on!! If you don't have any solution then forget all the things and start your life on a new path.Because life never stop.By the way at last you have express your feeling in front of world.
ReplyDeleteNice and touching poem........but wt happ girl??
ReplyDelete@neha ..thnk u ..kuj nahi hua dost ...nthng personal ...chillax...yeh meri creativity hai ..dekha !!
ReplyDeleteNice one.... heart touching...Gud hai... keep it up :-)
ReplyDelete@ vivek sir ...thnk u ...!
ReplyDeleteLove is always creative, Genius is essentially creative as like u...
ReplyDelete@ abhinav ...thnk u google ji... i knw i m genius ..hi hi hi!!
ReplyDeleteamazing its a beautiful and touching poem..loved it
ReplyDeletesad & COOL STORY
ReplyDeleteamazing... its so beautiful and touching ..loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteNice piece of writing
ReplyDelete...Rajnish Kumar
I knw i hv been proved as an emotional fool..
ReplyDeleteBt, i still dun believe it was u who used me as a dumb doll...
ye line me rhyming ka thorra problem hai..otherwise the poem is very touchy
@ aatreye...i knw ..but mujhe yahi likhna tha ..isliye ..bhawnaon ko samjho ....!!!
ReplyDeleteSuperbly Composed.. Brilliantly articulated.. This work of your thoroughly infests my heart and compels me to take a bow.. Good Job
ReplyDelete@ abhijit ...ohhh my godd!!...this is unbelievable ....itni zyada tareef ....thnk u so much!!!
ReplyDeletewho is this person u r tokin abt???
ReplyDelete@ sukhi ....no one specific ..!!
ReplyDelete@ bakshish ..true ..its nt at all...thts y at the end the girl is still waitng for him to come n hold her n move on with her !!
ReplyDeleteThat is a deep feeling u have tried to dig. Its so touching.
ReplyDelete@ vinneta di ..hmm ...u knw it all!!
ReplyDeleteGood work... waiting for more posts in your blog!!
ReplyDelete@ RIA ..THNX ...but whos this ??
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