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Kaise......???


Kitni baar in sanson ko roka,
kitni baar ankhon ko poncha!
dhadkan tham gayi,
par tumhari yaad na thami,
tumhe pukarne wali awaz na thami!

kaise junoon hai yeh feeka nahi padta,
kaisa ehsaas hai yeh jisko pa kar bhi ji nhi bharta,
tumhe zindagi bhar nahi pa sakungi,
ek na ek din kho dungi,
par phir bhi zid karta hai dil,
tumhe pane ko ab bhi tarasta hai dil!

Jab Khud hi ki dhadkan main sunti hun tumhara naam,
to kaise karu tumhe khud se anjaan!

tumhara naam ibadat hai meri,
aur tumhara ehsas zindagi!

Sanson k bina agar jiya jata..to tumhe na mangti,
andhere main agar raste dikhte,
to tumhare bigair kaam chala leti

magar jab dhadkan bhi tum ho aur roshni bhi tum
....to kaise jiyu
aur kaise rahu tumse door!!!

By Gurleen
I am a creative writer who loves to pen down the unconscious flow of thoughts going in my mind.

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  1. maniNovember 16, 2010 at 2:40 PM

    good very realstic

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  2. GurleenNovember 16, 2010 at 3:33 PM

    hmm ..thnx manika!!

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  3. SukhspeareNovember 16, 2010 at 3:38 PM

    tujhe pyar hua pyar hua ... allah miyan ;)

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  4. GurleenNovember 16, 2010 at 3:41 PM

    ! sukhi ...lol!!!

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  5. poojaNovember 16, 2010 at 4:47 PM

    good one....hehe.....sukhi sahi keh rahi haa bilkul........

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  6. GurleenNovember 16, 2010 at 5:12 PM

    @ neha ...THNX ..N wat he he he ...aiwe!!!

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  7. vidishaNovember 16, 2010 at 10:13 PM

    Hummm A very basic emotion... with which most of us have gone through... & u & kanika had expressed it beautifully...

    Kuch Gam jo har khushi se bhipyare the...
    the Bheed may bhi jab tanha...wahi Jine k sahare the...

    & Yeah Sukhspeare ne sahi kaha hai :P

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  8. GurleenNovember 17, 2010 at 9:51 AM

    @ vidisha...thnx ...but yeh yeh maine likha hai sirf!!
    @ rajnish ..thnx :)

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  9. kanikaNovember 17, 2010 at 12:00 PM

    That was very grt!!!... waise u r so romantic by heart. aunty ko bol jaldi tere liye ladka dhund le..

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  10. GurleenNovember 17, 2010 at 12:04 PM

    thnx kanika ....but har baat main shaadi kahan se a jati hai ??

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  11. raviinder ahluwaliaNovember 17, 2010 at 5:56 PM

    thik hai gurleen..par waisi nai hai jaise maine sikhayi thiii..u still need to go long way....:)

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  12. GurleenNovember 17, 2010 at 5:58 PM

    @ ravi ...ol ...nautanki ....tune sikhaya ...inborn talent hai ...saale!!

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  13. anuthegr8November 17, 2010 at 6:03 PM

    realy dost tusi great ho very very nice jitni tarif karu kam hai.....................

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  14. GurleenNovember 17, 2010 at 6:09 PM

    @ anu ..thnk u so so much!!

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  15. raviinder ahluwaliaNovember 17, 2010 at 6:09 PM

    sorry soni...i forgot dt u told me not to talk about this publically ,so sorry,,, anywys so here it is...u have great talent...OMG pool of talent is overflowing in ur case...
    awesum,mindblowing,fantastic,superb....JAI MATA DI (lets rock)...lolz..:) :) :)

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  16. GurleenNovember 17, 2010 at 6:14 PM

    @ ravi ...oh my god ..u really dun need to exaggerate and get jealous ...i knw wat i m n very much aware of my talent and abilities ....!!!

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  17. DeepikaNovember 26, 2010 at 3:03 PM

    Wonderfully written.. captured emotions very well !!! Someone not in love cant write this.. :P

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  18. GurleenNovember 26, 2010 at 3:22 PM

    @ deepika ..thnk u so much ...n u r absolutely right ..had i nt been truly in luv with u ..i wudnt have written this!!

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  19. DeepikaNovember 29, 2010 at 10:28 AM

    Lolzzz... ya rite.. kyu nahi!!! Gud escape haaan..

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  20. GurleenNovember 29, 2010 at 4:27 PM

    its no escape thing ...its really the truth!!!

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