Ek ajnabi!!
Ek ajnbi ki khoj hai jisko dil ka hal bata saken,
Yahan apno ke samne to khul ke ansu bhi na baha sake!
khud se hi khud ko chipaya hai,
Humne to apne dard ko apni muskan ke peeche dabaya hai!
Kaise batayen kis rah pe khade hain,
Yahan to bheed main ho ke bhi tanha se hain!
sab kuj hote hue bhi kami hai kisi ki,
tairte pani ki tarah zindagi hai apni bhi!
Kahin kuj to ab bhi baaki hai,
dil dhadakta to hai, par uski dhadkan ki awaz kahin gum si hai!
Ankhen roti hain, par dimag use kubool nahi karta,
Khud ka hi dil aur dimag ek doosre ka iktehar nahi karta!
Anjane si lagti hain khud ki batein humko,
Abto pehchanne se katrata hai dil khud ko!
Kehta hai, khali sa hun unke bigair,
Kar gaye jo humko ik pal main gair!
Kaise kahe yeh unse,
Ankhen jhukti hain aaj bhi sajde main unke!
Sapno main milte the woh,
Par aajkal to wahan bhi khali sa pate hain khud ko!
Ab to sooraj ki kiran bhi koi umeed nahi lati,
bas bheegi ankhon ko sookne ki wajah de jati!
woh roshni, jismian dhoonta hai dil woh ajnabi,
Jisko kahan karte the hum apna kabhi!!....:(
By Gurleen Kaur
kya baat hai soni??
ReplyDeletebut d post shows to be very sad... kush hoke jee beta,,
life ek bar hi milti hai
i m happy beta ...its just a part of me ..aise hi kabhi kabhi!!
ReplyDeletekabhi kabhi bhi nahi hona chahiye...
ReplyDeletebe happpy always...
hmmm i m ..meri creativity pe dhyaan do ..sadness pe nahi ..:))
ReplyDeletegud-2....talented girl....mera asar ho raha hai tjhpe.....gud goin...but bahut udaas-2 hai teri poetry...
ReplyDeletehan madam aap hi ka to asar hai ...udas ka kya hai ...jo dil se nikla woh likh diya!!
ReplyDeletehan madam aap hi ka to asar hai ...udas ka kya hai ...jo dil se nikla woh likh diya!!
ReplyDeleteदोस्त बहुत जल्दी मिल जायेगा वो अजनबी... जिसकी आपको हैं ....तलाश ...
ReplyDeleteacha aapko itni surity kaise hai ??..n waise pehle aap apne ajnabi ki khoj to poori kijiye!!
ReplyDeletegud job yaar, thoda saady types hai but changes made in presentation are gud.
ReplyDeletegud1
ReplyDeletevery well written...but this loneliness has become an integral part of everyone lives these days..so m sure it can be related to..
ReplyDeleteU have picked a perfectly suitable pic for this...well done !!
@ shitima thnk u ...
ReplyDelete@ deepika ..thnk u so much ..hmmm thts y i published it ...coz most of the people feel the same these days ...!
Ya really yar mujhe bahut bahut bahut achcha lga kya bat hai soni tum me yar man gya yar
ReplyDelete@ anurag ..thnk u so much !!..:)
ReplyDeletefantastic !!
ReplyDeleteHi GuLL, very well written,...keep it up u can do better than that....Rajnish Kumar
ReplyDeletevery beautifully written ...m sure most of the people would be able to relate with it ...
ReplyDelete@ arjun ..thnx .....:)
ReplyDelete@ rajnish ...thnk u ..!
@ meenakshi ..thnks sweety ...even i hope the same ..:) :)
nice one girl........
ReplyDeletevvvvvvv nice!!!
ReplyDeletethnx ..neha n sukhi!!..:)
ReplyDeleteAs u r saying its a part of Everyone life i agree but it also depends on the person too , is he /she really deserve that much important in our life " ki hum uske liye aasoo bahaye jisko uski parwah bhi nahi".
ReplyDeleteAs per my opinion forget the past and welcome to new life and live every moment of your life coz it will never come again.so CHEEEEERS.waise well written.
@ manika ...thnk u madam ...n han i m living my life to the fullest ..koi doubt ??
ReplyDeleteyes , thats why i have commented like this.Try to post happy happy thoughts , then everyone will be happy happy.
ReplyDelete@ manika ....ohki madam i will do that also ..bt this is also a part of our life ..which we cannot ingnore sweety!!...:)
ReplyDeleteGurleen this poetry talk about the inner self that sometimes we ignore or pretend that it doesn't exist but it does. The poetry is beautiful as it describes the most complicated inner self. Well done.
ReplyDelete@b kanika ..thn u madame!!
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